Again, I think this is a pretty darn good photo already, which makes editing it harder, in my opinion.
Here's the original:
Edit using Nelly Nero's Moody BW action
Edit using Noel Joy's Picture Pop action
And lastly, edit using AMP's Apricot Cream action
I think the black and white is my favorite of the three edits, the skin tone looks washed out in the others.